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inferno · Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 11:31 am

i was asked to do some fantasy related gfx few days ago, and here's the result, although it's not finished. i wanna hear some opinions before i'd go any further.

damn, veb, your stuff is so inspiring

i'd be soo glad if you were give me some advices

thx in advance

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TheMilkMan · Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 11:42 am

Inferno...this looks good in many ways but it had a lot of weakpoints that are bothering me . The anatomy is a little wierd in some places and some places you have a bit of bluriness that would be better suited sharp. Hmmm I am terrible at wording things like this....if I get time I will paint something....looks good overall though.

Anthony · Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 1:23 pm

I think he looks a little pink-like his flesh is irritated. That is more of a style associated with more weird/bizarre imagery, whereas the more tanned colors are associated with more standard figures. It's just the feeling you want to give off. Personally the colors makes me uneasy about it. Oh, and his right forarm-might want to take that top side of it up a bit near his body, to show which way it's rotating.

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absinthe · Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 3:02 pm

someday, i hope, fantasy will not necessarily be equated with huge muscled men and nearly-nude women.

check out michael whelan's stuff.

eetu · Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 3:22 pm

hmm. her mouth seems to be in the wrong place

ee.

inferno · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:01 am

yeah i agree, i will work on it. wel, about the anatomy.. actually i was given some outlines i had to use. but i'll try to correct them as well.. i'll post when i get something ready..

btw here's what they gave me that i had to use..

ps: milkman, feel free to draw over. i really like to see!

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v1510nAry · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:18 am

i think the anatomy suits him because hes a monster in a manner of speaking.

But the womans head looks funny don't know what it is :/ , and her swords needs to be bloodier and longer and sharper, way longer than the 1 u got

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CrakBEENie · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:22 am

i like it...the only anatomy thing that bugs me a bit, is the guys thumb in the hand hes holding the mace ball in looks a little weird...maybe its just me, but the position makes it look like its just another finger and not a thumb....but, good job...what did you use by the way??

inferno · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:27 am

thx

i guess i'm gonna update it tomorrow.. i'm getting more and more tired.
anyway i've used painter and ps
see you later

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travis travis · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 7:28 am

A lot of shiny, but it's in that hardcore fantasy painterly way, so I think it works. Could use a more definite line of what should be detailed and what shouldn't... like I mean the guy's eye, and the skin between the girl's armpit and breast, those are good details but the picture kind of bounces around. Very cool though.

inferno · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 9:41 am

i didn't have time, but i've made some modifications. here it is. although it's still far from finished

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kilopere · Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 10:08 am

I think the females upper body looks a little funny. I can't put my finger on it maybe her head is too big or her shoulders are too broad