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Visigoth
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 Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 3:51 am |
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This has some pretty obvious flaws, but considering how long it took me (just under 4 hours, concept sketches to shading) I don't really expect much of it. =P I'll be re-doing this image in Photoshop, but I wanted to get some suggestions/critique's first...Anyone have any? Fire away... 
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Hurri-cane
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| Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 6:37 am |
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nope looks good, or perhaps this little strange feeling about her lower arms /hands, something isnt right there i think....hmm...nice shading on her body ! thumbs up !
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| Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 7:18 am |
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| Great shading on the body/wings. |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 9:55 am |
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Well I really like this. I love the mask, the horns, the armor, and the wings. And the shading overall is great. I say just head straight to PShop.
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| Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 11:43 am |
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Thanks...
I do have to fix a few problems though...Her body is tilted unnaturally, the right nipple is higher than the left...there's not enough shading on the left breast, the left shoulder is not pronounced enough, the clavicles are tilted at odd angles...etc. =P~
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| Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2001 6:08 am |
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might add the shoulder-guards and gauntlets look a little too tight/small, IMO. And the wings look rather glued to her back, than belonging to her body.
Nice one, though! |
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| Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2001 11:16 am |
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y does she bother wearing all that armor on her arms and stuff when she leaves her chest and stomach open? 
hehe, i like the shading and the wings are very cool indeed. i also like that mask!
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| Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2001 11:25 am |
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Hehe thanks for the suggestions...
Regarding how the wings look glued on...
That's another one of my older pieces of the same wing design...You can see where the top muscle is an extension of the trapezius, and the lower an extension of that lats....Took me forever to figure out how to draw it...heh
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 7:51 am |
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Yeah, on the second one it's integrated much better. But you did not draw this setup in the first version, IMHO. The shoulder should blend a little more with the "second shoulder", where that wing starts.
Like the second one a lot, sexy but deadly! |
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