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Scion junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 7 Location: Edmonton, Alberta
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 4:39 pm |
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Here's 2 drawings that I retraced and scanned in, plan on coloring them in with my wacom once I get it in a few weeks, plz tell me what you think!
Here's the above image that I sketched in before retracing it-
[This message has been edited by Scion (edited February 07, 2001).]
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LeChuck member
Member # Joined: 20 Dec 1999 Posts: 406 Location: unknown
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 4:56 pm |
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I like the dragon picture a lot. |
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Hurri-cane member
Member # Joined: 01 May 2000 Posts: 466 Location: sweden
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 6:48 am |
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try to add alittle more line weight so that the shapes are easier to understand...
well i dont have anything more to say
looks good, wanna see em colored tho
.caenmana |
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Cuddly member
Member # Joined: 02 Jan 2001 Posts: 161 Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 7:07 am |
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Hi Scion,
you asked for crits so here we go:
The head, neck and shoulders of the first character seem to be a little too small for the rest of the body (I assume that's the head showing from under the big collar thing).
The anatomy of the figure in the second drawing is a bit off as well.
Now the parts I liked:
Love the dragon creature. Are those the nostrils or eyes in the snout area?
Love the overall fantasy feel of the pieces. The original sketch is quite good in terms of line weights and shading. If you could translate that to your final painting, I think you'd have a pretty good looking piece.
Look forward to seeing the final art. ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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CrakBEENie member
Member # Joined: 08 Feb 2001 Posts: 60 Location: washington
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2001 9:21 pm |
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you got the imagination and like to draw...go to life drawing and study rendering....good work |
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