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Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

Here is an inked version of that guy I drew a few weeks ago. Max from Roswell.

I know.. not much digital here, but I just had to sketch something.

I know nothing about this character, but since I was looking at pics early today this just sort of came out.

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jasonN · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 8:53 pm

Hi chapel,
Nice pics I can see the comic influence

As for crit, well, the first one is good and solid, but the line thickness is a little too thick in areas. Try experiementing with really thin line or even none at all on highlighted edges etc..
The second one, the bridge of the nose seems a little off, also the head connects directly too the neck, but in real life, the back of the cranium sticks out a little bit.
The ohter two are really nice though, especially the last one I like the shading and his mouth.

-Jason

creepfever · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 9:08 pm

I like your characters , you and I have a little in common mechanically. Do you have a separate gallery of complete work on the web?

The Creep Fever

Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

Thanks for the comments. I did these really quick. I'm just trying to get in the habit of drawing. So, these may be simular to something I saw in a comic because I flipped through some before I started sketching. The Hellboy pic just kinda came out, because it was originally just supposed to be a normal guy but I got frustrated and through down random lines.

More of my crap can be seen at my site: http://liquid2k.com/kaiju/

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Binke · Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 11:38 am

Heh, that looks like Micke =))

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Socar MYLES · Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 12:49 am

Nice inkwork! I'd like to see a bit of finer penwork, though--maybe some crosshatched areas to better define the planes of the face.... You've obviously got a good grasp of facial anatomy--you just need to add a little more definition.

The only other thing I'd say is: Get some colour on it! Especially the picture of the girl. I like the girl. The girl is good. Keep going....

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