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Bubonic
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 Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 1:02 pm |
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the lip looks a bit too tilted to her left.
i like the hair and eyes, hope to see it colored |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 11:23 pm |
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Well It looks to me like you need to work on her arma bit... the back of her arm should be more convex than concave...
try looking at a muscle structure poster... Im sure you can find one on the net somewhere..
looking good tho... keep working on it..
-awe
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strata
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| Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 12:21 am |
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To me the eyes look strangely puckered...
Like either she's got a big bag'o potatos under each one of maybe it's drawn wrong...
I would say (should I actually have something clever to say, and I'm not saying that I do) that you've drawn the inner shape of the eye nicely... but then the outer lines with the lower lid and stuff is very odd... it shouldn't connect like that... or be as pertruding (?).... try just shading in the eye lids... go get a stomph or something like that. And as (I think if was wayfinder, cheers) someone told me, if you're doing eyelashes, then start them a bit into the eyelid.
Major thing is that you've got too much definition close to the nosebone.
Lips look a bit slushy too, and you should shade it more 
Marvellous other then that!
btw is that supposed to be Madonna or something?
[This message has been edited by strata (edited February 06, 2001).] |
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Kryckan
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| Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 12:26 am |
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Hi!I have just discovered digital art,I have only painted on paper before. And i made this sketch a while ago.
do you recorgnize her?
What do you think about it. Is there anything i should fix before i collor it??
/Kryckan |
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ArtKeo
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| Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 3:54 am |
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I got to know her through your file name.
Hey, any of the sisters in the Corrs make interesting subjects for drawing.
It looks as if she drank too much coffee and her eyes are wide wide open. Big.
Make the eyelashes darker.
The hand in her hair looks a bit weird. |
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Kryckan
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| Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 1:03 pm |
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hello!!
no not madonna!!!
im trying to fix the mistaks!!
thanks for the help!!! |
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girish
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| Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 11:27 pm |
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| I think the neck is a bit too thin too, or atleast its placed incorrectly. Maybe its just me... my guess.. Liv Tyler? |
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Freaker
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| Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 12:15 am |
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Its Madonna for sure, right?
it looked okay, if i layed eye on it, but if i saw pic more, the mistakes came out...the muscular and the lip....but its sure Madonna, right 
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