[the wingless]

I'm all out of ideas for this one... any of your ideas would be a great help. Thanks ^_^



It's about 85-95% done, depending on where you look.

Thankx! And please come to the site and sign the guestbook. Nobody's done it in a while >_<

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[This message has been edited by the wingless (edited January 24, 2001).]

[Rossimo]

Oh my God that is awesome. About a minute ago I got out a piece of paper and decided i was going to draw an angel...came here and wahoo. Awesome pic.

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[v1510nAry]

aye aye , agree with Icannon , its calls for a body .
half of the arm just doesn't go with the rest of the mazing art work

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[feebsaint]

Well, "the wingless," I love your work. As bloody as your theme is, the blunted stub of her arm is a bit off. I don't normally like manga art, unless it's at this caliber. Great style!

As to your guest book, I received this quote:

"The ability to sign this guestbook is no longer available."

(cut and paste of exact text). Oh well... I tried, right? And I may have solved the mystery of why people don't sign your guestbook anymore. I say you should contact geocities (or whoever hosts your guestbook).

Now that I've tried yours, come visit mine, k? Good luck with your work... I'm bookmarking you in my favorites.

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[Icannon]

i really like the wings, they're very nifty. the hair kind of looks like foam tho because you fudged around so much with the airbrush. try masking it off and using long even strokes, or even just a gradiant would look nice.
as for ideas, i'm not sure. the composition kind of calls for a body.. but *shrug*. neato.

[Dives]

i like the wings and the face but i think the blood really ruins the picture... se looks like an innocent angel and not a battle angel so i don't think it is appropriate... imho

[EviLToYLeT]

Looks great. But, teh blood splurting out and the anime style just doesn't match. Anime blood has its shaped defined and outlined, not just airbrushed in. The arm cut off also seems hollow and it looks like a very clean ut at the wierdest angle. The arm.....getting cut off just isn't a good idea. With the arm cut off like that, it makes us think the rest of the body is cut off. I think the most you should do is add tears instead of blood to the face... fix up the arm... and that's all

[the wingless]

the arm isn't really a stub. It's hollowed out inside. She's not so much human as she is... an artifact. I'm not really sure how to explain it better than that. This is one of those social commentary pieces. You know, hollow angels caked in gold... you can interpret it however you want. I just looked at it and thought "hmm... me like gold."

I don't know about the blood. On the eye it looked good, but I agree with you on the arm. I'll probably make a couple different versions of this pic, since it's got that kind of potential.

Oh, and thanks about the guestbook... Geocities sucks ass, but I guess we already knew that ^_^

--j.a.

[Freddio]

yes it may help if you fix the guestbook?