[feebsaint]

If anyone convinces you to stop doing these, I'll personally kick their ass... and as someone who get's asked "Do you play football?" more than "Are you an artist?" ... I can do it >:)

I'd say lose nothing, but add one thing (I feel is very important). I really like the idea of the foot and hand enlargement, but at first glance, it didn't read as a zoom in, but a poor attempt at anatomy. If you created a border, or brought those images out more by giving the appearance of a layer or something (I think you get the gist)... it would work better. Brightening it, Darkening it, subtle edges on left and right.... anything.... just make it more apparent to the viewer, bring it out in some way.

I don't normally say things over and over, but I'm struggling today, with my explanations. Bleah!!

Like I said... keep doing these... don't stop... it's a definite gift you have! :) Any normal artist's attempt at this would look too busy; but you make it work comfortably. Great eye you have. Keep it up!

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~-Mike May-~

mikespencil.com

"I Draw Stuff"

[Theophilis Divinity]

Damn Feebs thanks for the input. It took me about a few minutes to figure what you're saying then it hit me. I never noticed how they blend into each other especially the leg. I noticed the order they fall and it made so much sense.

By the way, I dig your work, you'd kick my ass with just your line work alone

Thanks again.

[Theophilis Divinity]

Well I dont normally do photo manips but I figured i'd give one a try. The illustration on the left was a project for class that i decided to spice up. Not sure of the overall design, I think the shoe leads the eye absolutely nowhere, and the bottom 2 inches could probably be removed, not sure. Also as far as the type goes any suggestions as to whether or not I should put some graffiti in its place. Any suggestions would be helpful. Also feel free to rip away on it, maybe then you could convince me not to do these anymore.



I've been trying to find time to post more of my pieces but due to my crappy job and school, time just hasn't been on my side.