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inferno
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 Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 11:19 am |
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it's something i've started yesterday.
i'd be glad if i could hear some useful crits. maybe you can see something i don't,
so with your help i will get a better result 
thx in advance
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inf's easel
[This message has been edited by inferno (edited January 23, 2001).] |
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dannorthcott
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 1:44 pm |
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possible try showing some wing above his shoulders, and his left wing seems too flat/small.
The right knee should be a little more to the left, i think |
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inferno
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 2:55 pm |
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thanks for the help guys. im gonna work a bit more on this pic later. btw ive already made some modifications, see above. gotta go now
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 9:24 pm |
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| The guys off blaance |
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tayete
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| Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2001 12:12 am |
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I think the right knee isn't correct. Try to imagine the bones of the leg, and you'll find where to place it.
And well, the under-arm zone (I do not know how it's called in English) needs some more treatment.
Anyway, I like the pic. |
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