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twisted
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Well, this is the first time I've tried to color something from off of here... and the first time I've posted any work on here, so what do you think so far? I got this line art from Rattmouth and I thought I'd give coloring a try. Crits are welcome.
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:56 am |
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looks good so far - something's wrong with the left cheek - I'm just not sure what it is.
You should work a bit more on the face's contrast.
The hair looks great, but you should smudge that spot between the ribbon in her hair and the shoulder a little bit more...
looking forward to the finished piece.
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OkkE
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 5:39 am |
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Nice! Alot better then my first coloring anyway.   |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 8:35 am |
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Where's your lightsource?
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 8:41 am |
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I guess the cheek needs some stronger shadows
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[This message has been edited by S4Sb (edited January 23, 2001).] |
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