Sijun Forums :: View topic - Fire Goddess Type Thing...Suggestions/Comments please

Rossimo · Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 5:53 pm

Started this yesterday...worked a little on it today. I'll probably finish it sometime later this week. Tell me what you like/dislike about it, and give me any suggestions you may have. Thankyaz.
Sorry about the large image size.

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-Rossimo-

Dan · Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 6:01 pm

well she's missing a little bit of important anatomy on her breasts. But I think the main issue would be the face. You look a little like u couldn't decide between 3/4 view and front so u just did a little of both. The features are places in the position of a front view and many of them are drawn that way, but the nose ear and the shape of the head seem to be at an angle.

::nox|silicon:: · Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 6:07 pm

nice idea...
the fire doesn't convince yet tho and the face's proportions/positions are quite wrong. the nose is too long and the chin is a bit too short. the perspective (left cheek) doesn't match well and the right eye is in a position like if her head would be straight rather than bent. also try working out more detail on the side of the head.
the fire looks ok on the roots of the hair (above her forehead), the rest doesn't look good to me yet. also the form of the hair/fire looks more like iof she was lying on a surface...
the body looks good, looking off the left elbow.

hope this helps

Looking forward to see this pic's progress...

p.s.: the face's aspect looks a bit picasso-ish

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[This message has been edited by ::nox|silicon:: (edited January 21, 2001).]

Rossimo · Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 6:56 pm

Yay finally some help

Yeh thanks all for pointing out my proportion mistakes and whatnot, not I can have fun fixing it all!
And yeah, the fire sucks at the moment, didn't spend much time on it.

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Rossimo · Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 7:18 pm

Whipped these proportions up...are they still wrong, or are they better?

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-Rossimo-

Nex · Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 4:58 am

better than before.
the neck could be a bit more straight down or even slightly curved to the (our) right(her left).

keep on working on that one, looking forward to your progress

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::nox|silicon:: · Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 6:48 am

looks better...
the left eye still doesn't line up (rotate it's outer corner down as bit), the right eyebrow is wrong (too far outside, wrong angle) and the nose is a bit too far right. however - the proportions already look way better than before

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