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Jenn · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 9:43 am

Just a quick sketch.. yeh i know i cant color :{

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faustgfx · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 9:46 am

the most perverted shade of red you've used for the background actually looks good. especially with the edge contrast from hell between the red and the green.

dig.

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sock · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 9:47 am

as i told you via icq already, the style looks a little bit strange but not uncool, but why can't i stop staring at it? hmm...

keep working like that jenn ,)

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Marckus · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 9:59 am

Yummy!

As i sayed on ICQ .. Nice picture!
I am still working hard on my drawings.. Hopefully i can get something up here soon too!

/Marckus

MrHiemey · Guest Member #

looks like it is coming along very well overall.
Since i am an artist though, I get to be picky and do lots of crits... hahaha.

include the face, or atleast some more canvas at the top, the pic looks cut off.
use lighter tones of the skin color, it looks too dark right now, doesn't stand out against the green and white... or make the skin darker so it stands out against the background and is emphasized by the white outlines.
You could even develop just the leg and lower torso portion of the drawing, and leave the rest sketchy and with the nice lines it has.
oh, and maybe something in the background to give it depth...(maybe) i don't know if that would take away from the image or not.

that's about as picky as i can get with it i think... you don't have to use any of these of course, they are just what would look good to me. Great job!! i look forward to developments...

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S4Sb · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 1:48 pm

Cool!

Hey, great to see you develope! First non fluffy I see from you.

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ceenda · member Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030

Hiya Jenn.

I like this pic alot, as the proportions are quite nicely set out and the style is cool.

Nice stuff!

Jenn · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 6:47 pm

Yay, Thankies peeps.. Replies are much apreciated. I would post the referance image but i dont really think its a good idea. Soo.. Yeh.. I will try and get this one finnished.. At the moment I am working on lightening her skin and so on.. So yeh.. I will post more development pics later on. I thought I would give up on cutesy stuff for now cause I am working on a small illustrated story with a friend.

Cheers!

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surferboi · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 8:26 pm

real nice jenn =) highlights and crosshatched shading look cool..

kanabis · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 8:32 pm

as i said on icq lo... no wait we didnt talk on icq

looks good anyway .... different form the norm which is good