Sijun Forums :: View topic - [CRIT] Clay Work # 4 (Study of a Womens Face; Emotion : Hap

[Optima] · member Member # Joined: 08 May 2000 Posts: 58

Hello all this is my 4th Clay work that I have posted on this board. Those of you who have not seen my past works search the past posts.

This work is of a female face, she is smiling .. So far this is what I have done.. been working on it for 2 days now... few hours.

I came here again for your desprate criticis. I need to konw what you find ackword and what you notice is wrong.

This work is in progress so do not mentioned such as hair or smoothing..

Here are the pictures so far:

Again thanks to all those who reply.. and help me out.

Thanks

[This message has been edited by [Optima] (edited January 10, 2001).]

JIM · Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 8:11 pm

yeah its getting there
the picture of that woman is nice.
grrrr....

sorry had to be done

Sergenth · Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 9:33 pm

I think you've got a great start and middle there in that sculpture. My favorite angle- shot is the last one... the contours of the cheeks, forehead, nose, and chin please me the most in that pic.

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 8:27 pm

Nice to see more clay work from you optima. How much do one of those clay chunks cost?

Well anyway, I think the left side of the hair looks a bit funny (first pic) Kind of makes it look like she's half bald. May want to fix that up somehow...

shardik · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 12:18 am

shes faking it

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-matt

Icannon · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 12:59 am

i painted over your model.. hope you dont mind. it's nice as it stands, but you might want to take my changes into account.

this may all be preference.. if so, just ignore my post. first i took away the downward slant of the nose (and slimmed it down a bit too). i thickened the bottom lip a bit, lowered the hair line, and strengthened the forehead\brow a litte. i shaped her eyes just a tad and slimmed her cheeks. these are just things i would likely do.

[Optima] · member Member # Joined: 08 May 2000 Posts: 58

Thank you all for your replies.. I will take everything into consideration...

Icannon: Thanks for the visual display it really helps.

I will keep posting updates of this model. If anyone want to modify any of the images to help me please feel free to do so. Visual is always better then words.

The clay comes to me for free its from school. But I would never buy it.. its very fregile when it dries and starts cracking. It comes in 20kg packages.

Thanks again