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Joy/Bogus
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Well actually it's not OK  i'm doing this picture from a photograph, started sketching, did some smudging, but now i want to take it to the next level and do some major cleaning on it. I just don't seem to be able to get rid of the smudgy look  any suggestions would be welcome
TIA
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Irulann
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 9:35 am |
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| well I think it's very beautiful the way it is...I have trouble sharpening too--maybe just use some hard brushes? |
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ViperCA
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 11:22 am |
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aakkk!!! don't sharpen it! it's gonna leave a lotta mood in the gutter if you do!
aside from that it's VERY nice it might be neet to see a little more detail by the windows |
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elam
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 1:08 pm |
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boobs are WAY to big.
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Bugscratch
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 1:20 pm |
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Silicone boobs maybe. I saw a pic of a porn star once that had even bigger boobs. Was kinda disgusting.
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 1:49 pm |
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Originally posted by elam:
boobs are WAY to big.
aaaah, put a sock in it!!!
GIMME TITS!!! GIIIIMMMEEEE!!!
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Jezebel
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 3:04 pm |
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Ummm... the nipple on our left looks kinda like a hole... it's sorta freaky 
Hmmm... and you ripped part of my sig! grrr...
I like the unfinished look :>
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Joy/Bogus
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 4:03 pm |
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Thanks alot for your input, i think i'm gonna work on it for a while without the cleaning and try to get some more detail on the arms and the pants.
Bugscratch: what's funny about sinaasappelsap? The glow you refer to is actually part of the original gray background that i didn't cover up yet!
Elam: they are like that on the photo too... realy!
akira_x: ah... so you could actually guess what this was then? Well thanx for repling on my other post as well (as you were the only one last time i looked!)
Jezebel: well could not think of a more suitable name for this post!? I'm open for suggestions!
See Ya
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 4:33 pm |
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big breasts are bad. :|
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IN5/NE-D/VE
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 4:48 pm |
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Jezebel is right about that nipple hehe, i think thye both need reworking actualy, also maybe alittle more detail and smudging in those pants and the top, ooh and the part between the breasts and just above the bellybutton (dark area) is just alittle TOO dark, tone it down or get rid of alittle of that black area to perfect it 
May i ask who the girl in the picture is??  |
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Giant Hamster
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| Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 5:42 pm |
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the shirt needs a lot of work, but its in the right direction. other than i dont know what that extra bump on the top is.
maybe you might want to save the pic again and try harsh shadowing, cause it might look interesting, cause right now its a mix of harsh and soft shadows.
oh, and about the boobs. ALL BOOBS ARE FINE. just do what you want with them, there is no wrong!
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Bugscratch
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| Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 12:34 am |
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Did you know that we have a lot of fun here in Germany reading texts written in your language ? Sinaasappelsap. Always good for a laugh  But I guess you're having the same fun reading German texts as well.
Err. Back to business I guess.
I don't think it needs any sharpening either. But you should get rid of the strange glow surrounding her body. And maybe you should give her some personality. Like this she`s a bit generic. Maybe you could just make one eye blinking out from under the hair.
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Joy/Bogus
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| Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 4:11 am |
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Now just to get rid of the boob thing i did a quick scan of the photo, it's by the french photographer Herv� Lewis, so i don't know the girl in the picture.
Still working on my painting hope to update it here soon.
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Joy/Bogus
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| Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 8:11 am |
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Updated the picture, still very unhappy about the arms  But then this is work in progress...
Would like some feedback on this version...
thanx
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