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Eorand · Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 11:57 am

Ok here it goes... all or nothing...

Some ship at sea, hope you dont feel nausea

Please give me some tips how to improve it.

-Eorand

Awetopsy · Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 1:44 pm

The truman show!!!

I watch way too much tv

I really like the waves.... and the noise at the crest of each wave but I think the boat needs some work...

put "S.S. Minnow" on it.

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ZenDrag0n · Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 1:56 pm

The mast pole or whatever it's called doesn't match the perspective of the hull.

Add some more contrast, stormy seas tend to be darker, as well as the sky.

Love the crest of the waves too. This is a beautiful start.

Eorand · Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 12:57 am

Thanks for comments.

BTW, there IS "S.S Minnow" on it but it reads only on back plane

Yeah, I agree that I left the boat a bit coarse. I became addicted to those waves also.

Here is little revised version. I added some darker colors to sky and fixed the boats perspective. I should also correct the mast and the sail. Sail should be piled down and hanging from the "bom".

[This message has been edited by Eorand (edited January 06, 2001).]

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 9:11 pm

Everything looks a little grayish. I think you need a little more color variation in the color. The pictures a bit "washed out" as everything has a greyish tone to it. Lado, the mast needs a litlte bit more shading... folds perhaps? (when the wind hits somethign at full blast..it usuall sends ripples through the cloth) Hope its been helpful.

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the mast is still a bit off. It kinda looks like it is on the edge of the boat and not angled as much as the boat. if that makes any sense at all