[paltsi]

What have I done wrong and what could i do better?
<img src="http://www.nic.fi/~paltsi/kesken5.jpg">

[paltsi]

[EviLToYLeT]

Hehe I like it. A few problems that I noticed on the alien is it is really lacking shape and definition. For example, the area around the nose is a bit ..... flat... putting in some shading would help there. Also, the perspective on the far eye is a bit off. You shouldn't be able to see the start of the eye... (the one closest to the right eye) because of the way the face curves around. Currently, it seems that the left eye extrudes out of the socker while the right eye doesn't. Anyway, on to the good comments. I see you've tried out the water drop tutorial. Keep in mind that perspiration doesn't start from the nouse. On humans, it basically forms where there is hair growth. Most common places are hair, brows, sideburns and upper lip. But then of course the guy is alien. Really like the way the breath is done... very cool. Just take your time and work on it, and it'll turn out great.