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bj91x · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 2:01 am

Well, here's what I have so far. It's not much different from when I last showed the pic. I did some more with her dress, her right arm is less buff, etc. The dress doesn't look exactly like the photo, but I really couldn't do any better than what you see here, cuz it has way too many lines. I am doing this with a mouse, not tablet, so I just can't do some of the parts right, her hair, mouth, etc. Any help would be nice, whether it's too short arm, too fat looking, or whatever. I'm trying to make this look as much like the photo as I can.

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Alloy · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 4:10 am

Looks pretty damn good so far. Having a mouse isn't a problem for not being able to do things right. Might just take a little more work. I do all my stuff with a mouse(until I get more used to my tablet).

Anyway, keep at it - looks great.

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Rag · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:51 am

Nice job! Can't wait to see it in the final works forum. This maybe too knit-picky, but trim a little off her right shoulder. Your's is a bit to pointy in ref. to the photo. And to do this with a mouse, nice job indeed.

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Optical · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 10:34 am

Looking very good so far man.. can't wait to see the finished product. Only thing i can really see wrong is something with the neck can't really explain, but check it out.

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the_monkey · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 11:45 am

that second one looks sooo real!

hey wait a sec...

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sharpe · Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 7:49 pm

i might be sick, in the real life pic, alittle bit of her tooth is showing.. it makes the picture more. hm sensual..

like shes about to open her mouth and kiss you... see if you could get that in there.. maybe?

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ZenDrag0n · Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 9:57 am

Wow. You made her look pretty. I suppose I should run now, the Buffy fans might try to kill me now.

Great job so far.

Periadam · Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 4:17 pm

There's 2 things I notice about it: the thing about the shoulder that was already mentioned, and I think you should add more hair to the back of her head. I don't think a mouse would stop you from doing that, and if it does, you have one f**king screwed up mouse.

It's looking great though! Keep it up.

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InKey · Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 4:00 am

So far as cut&pasting goes, thats pretty cool...

you need to paste more hair on the back of her head though.