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opticillusion member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 255
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:09 pm |
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What was a quickie ended up to be something I keep going in for changes...so any help or suggestions on this would be much obliged.
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Bubonic member
Member # Joined: 21 Sep 2000 Posts: 209 Location: Long Island, NY, US
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:21 pm |
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i really like the bg, but the character itself doesn't look rendered well enough, looks more like a big shape than a person.. I like the lil green light though..
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N8X member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2000 Posts: 112 Location: Austin,Tx usa
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:52 pm |
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i like this alot. Giants?
maybe if you put some reflected light from the cayon wall bouncing off his middle torso might help.. But i also like it how it is... great colors and mood.
n8x
[This message has been edited by N8X (edited January 02, 2001).] |
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Icannon member
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 2000 Posts: 597 Location: st.albert, AB, Canada
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 12:28 am |
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this is nice. it made me feel very relaxed.. nice colors. |
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Matt Elder member
Member # Joined: 15 Jan 2000 Posts: 641 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 1:23 am |
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Really nice colours and you are creating a nice atmosphere. The main problem that I see is that I don't get a good sense of the character, what they are doing (other than siting). It looks like you have some interesting ideas going on but you just can't make them out. |
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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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opticillusion member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 255
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 8:10 pm |
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Bubonic > Good point, I'm working on giving the backpack and clothes more form, and lightening up the shadows a bit.
NBX > hmmm. You see a giant eh? Will try to add something to the background to scale him down a bit then
Icannon > thanks
Matt > Another good point. I'm working on a vertical shot as well, having another masked climber above him...otherwise, there is a bit of a storyline to this shot, which I'll get posted when it's done.
I'll try and get an update up tomorrow. Thanks for the comments! |
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N8X member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2000 Posts: 112 Location: Austin,Tx usa
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 12:36 am |
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Sorry, i ment that it looks like one of the Mechs out of the Giants game. sorry for the confusion, i think the scale is just fine.
N8x |
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