[JIM]

THIS is what i been working on.
i designed him about 4 years ago... ya da ya da.
wanted him "photoshopped"
its almost close to half-way being done.
so here's what i have so far.
critique...for the love of GOD please critique

[waylon]

I guess, first off, is it supposed to be a human in armor, or some sort of alien? If it's a human in armor, he's in desparate need of a chin - the bottom of his head is way too round. If he's supposed to be an alien, you may want to change around a few other details of his anatomy, 'cause he sure looks like a human in armor (with no chin. )

For the parts you haven't put detail into yet... Well, it looks like you may run into a little trouble with the arms once you start defining the shapes a little better. They just sort of pass through each other right now. It's very important to get the basic shapes correct before you try adding any detail, so I'd make sure the arms look correct and distinct before anything else. Same with the torso - it's just not quite right. And it's much better to get all the anatomy right, but simple, than to fix one thing at a time as you go along.