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Acid
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 9:31 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, this is my first post, I've had a wacom tablet for 2 months or something now and have been lurking around here for something like 3 months, very nice stuff you got here

Well, here's some of the pictures I've done this far though there is more... I tried to keep it modem friendly by putting a link to each image instead of posting them in to the thread. Enjoy.
http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/alien_skull.jpg http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/cold_man.jpg http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/Cornbutt_the_ranger.jpg http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/abduction.jpg http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/xmas_elf.jpg http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/alien_visitor.jpg http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/mad_man.jpg

And then there's this one I'm still working on. http://www.saunalahti.fi/tljmik/sijun/under_developement.jpg
(hehe, was just doodling the sketch in school and happened to like it so I scanned the damn thing, still needs "some" work as you can see)

Well generally I think these all have a very unfinished look to them since I'm bit too lazy when it comes down to finishing my pics

Okay, crit all you wan't, try to forgive my bad english and most of all, have a very merry christmas!

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Ahcri
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 9:57 am     Reply with quote
Welcome! I think some pieces are very cool, but here's my opinion:
2) Try to make the cloth softer.. the wrinkle doesn't look very natural.
5) The wrinkle on the elf is too strong, kinda looks like metal. But the lighting is good, so don't remove that.
The rest are very good, except *maybe* you should use a smaller brush to add some more detail.
But that's just me..

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Acid
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 5:15 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for your crits, I think your right on both of those (and the detail thing too) but I don't think I'll fix those...hehe...call me lazy :P

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