[TRAZE]

This was my first release ever, made with pshop 6, true painting hope u like it




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[TRAZE]

Yep, i put these image in OJ`s webspace saves my own
Best regards and thx for the critic
TRAZE



[This message has been edited by TRAZE (edited December 23, 2000).]

[Zoso]

Hallo Traze!

Just wanted to say that I like your drawing, and think it will turn out well once you get that perspective fixed up. Other than that I think Frost hit on all the important things.

[Frost]

Looking nice Traze, and welcome.

If you would like some critiques, which will help you improve if that's in your interest, here are a few things I've noticed. There are some perspective problems, mostly around the mouth, where we see the teeth from head-on too much, and because of perspective, the upper and lower teeth would not be parralel, but would receed and seem to become closer the further away they are from the viewer. The nose could use a bit more work, to make it break apart from the lips a bit more, even though I understand he is transforming into a wolf at the fullmoon. Nice image. =)

[edit] -- funny just happened, I just commented on this, and I went over to ojuice.net (for the first time in months) and saw your pic there.. hehe. weird. =)


[This message has been edited by Frost (edited December 23, 2000).]

[Krazy]

looking good nice drawing just the small details that have already been mentioned keep it up