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nova
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Joined: 23 Oct 1999
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 3:51 pm     Reply with quote
Alo,

I devoted myself to producing some kind of drawing 2 days ago, our first snow day (yahoo!). Here's the product of that slight insanity:



She's part of a group of teenagers from an RPG i'm making for my senior project. I have no name for her yet. And uh, if a colored version surfaces, i'll post it.

So if anybody could provide me with any critiques or ideas, that'd be great

[edit: sorry about that, Skeez, here ya go]

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[This message has been edited by Nova (edited December 17, 2000).]
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Skeezer
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Location: Lake Stevens, Wa, USA

PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 3:58 pm     Reply with quote
Hello Nova, I can't see your pic. Plz. fix.
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Location: calgary, alberta, canada

PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:20 pm     Reply with quote
yay new picture! i think its great as b+w, doesn't need coloring but coloring is always fun. the only thing i find kinda weird is that foot on the right, looks short but thats just me. that, and she has quite a forehead.

i like it though, don't forget to show off the colored version!

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:25 pm     Reply with quote
damn. really good sketch. Now then there is some problems I think. I think here neck seems to be a bit skinny and the head feels kinda small compared to the rest of the body.
And I think the knees are a bit to high.
And maybe the left boot is a bit to big compared to the left one.
looks very good other than that...I could just kiss her =)
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:50 pm     Reply with quote
Hey Nova - Nice style and linework, I wanna see more. I can't rememer your other stuff....so I'm off to your homepage!.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 10:53 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, nice pencil work. It looks very complete.

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Dhabih
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 3:56 am     Reply with quote
Nice! I really think every pic your doing is getting better and better. Heard about your senior project from someone else. Good luck with that!
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