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burn0ut
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This is just somethin i was working on today. Its not done yet, but any comments or critiques would be helpfull 
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-stephen
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AlieN
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| Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 7:13 pm |
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heh, neato. I like it. The colors go really well with each other, and the overall feeling is really illustrative.
One nitpick is that the animal's halter isn't quite connected to the animal's head.. |
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InKey
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| Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 7:23 pm |
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Thats a nice pic.
One thing though!
Are they both cold or smoking cigarettes cause that looks like a sand storm on the horizon... |
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Bubonic
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| Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 7:48 pm |
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| looks good so far, i like the lighting on the back of his shirt.. once you finish the bg, there should be a better idea of what they are looking at.. |
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 8:03 pm |
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nice, good color scheme, it gives the feel of like a pastel painting, something you would see in a book... Also it has nice lines, very smooth and calming
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 12:08 am |
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Added alittle more ish to it, i think this is finished, working with a mouse suxs  The reason i started colorin it digitally was to initially get colors how i wanted before doing it with color pencils/markers and got alittle carryed away :P
AlieN: Does the 'halter' looks better now? 
InKey: There both smoking cigarettes(accually its winter and very cold outside )
Bub:thx, I only scanned in this half of the picture because i wanted to quickly get some nice colors(which wasnt quick at all!)
dry: thanks'
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:04 pm |
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poinks, does anyone else have any suggestions that would make this look better?
thx
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Funfetus
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| Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:18 pm |
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It's a nice picture, but WAY too stiff-looking for my taste. Everything's so straight -- so many nearly straight lines, no curve to the man's back, no curve to the animal's neck...
Not technically bad, but it bothers me.
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:28 pm |
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damn, u are sooo right, i think ill mess around with some thumbnails n get more life into it, i think it really lacks in weight and movement, thanks for the simple comment fetus its very usefull!
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