[donk]

i posted this yesterday, but now it's off the page and i only got one reply, and oh how i love replies. so dont get mad, just please say something. redo's, critiques, death threats, you name it.

i love it so much

[Chapel]

Nice and simple Donk. I would add a splash of orange behind the character.

[tr0n]

Shade the mask a bit.

[Tron]

simple

[Moonlord]

dunno but it seems to me that the black outline is way too big.
just draw over this pic in photoshop w/ a thinner outline. That would result in a way better image I think.

oh, and you should do some shading on the blue mask too.

[Ampa]

Add some shading to the mask to suggest curvature, and reflection. Plus give the picture a background - something bold, bright, simple, geometric. Clean up the black mess on the left.

Oh and in future - don't repost the same image - if you really have to get it seen then 'bump' the image to the top, by replying to it - like with the word bump or sumting. Read the FAQ for more info on bumping.

Ampa.

[[Shizo]]

err dud, first of all why did you post such huge picture? Awful manners..:)
Anyways, make the pic smaller and add some pale color - techno style background.

I kiss the milky blue color of his mask (i wish to think you made up this character, but i suppose you "took" it from some anime cartoon and i hate anime)

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[[Shizo]]

PS: very important: don't shade the face mask (much) but do this cartoon-like half shadow ... like shading with only 2/3 colors you know?
And another one, the image would improve if you sharpened the edges of his mouth, because it's very easy for artist to see that you just went with a plain brush on there without any touch up.

[donk]

thanks all, i made this up on paper, i just scanned and colored. it's original too. i like the big lines though, and i tried shading the mask and it didnt look that good, but i'll try another shot.

[Bradford]

Cool!

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