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jasonN
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Sorry, couldn't think of a header 
Just a little pic I did on the weekend. Any comments or critique would be appreciated.
Oh and I posted this pic up a while ago, but I didn't get much crit on it at all. If anyone could offer some tips on the lighting and especially how to fix up the arm, I'd really appreciate it. At the moment the arm looks like a hairy gorilla arm. 
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Bradford
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| Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2000 1:54 am |
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Nice picture on the top, I really like the facial expression it has, I find facial expression is a very important part in faces.
Now with the second picture, the arm could use a little refinement by not depicting the muscle so well. What I mean by this is too make the bulge on his arm less obvious (especially with the lighting), and maybe make it more smooth (add some hair of course). Sorry for not knowing the names of the parts of the arms 
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Delucubus
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| Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2000 3:33 pm |
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Hey, that first pic is great. I really like it.
About the second picture. I like the colors you used but what brad said, the bicep really stands out, blend it in with the rest of the arm a little bit more. |
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jasonN
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| Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2000 9:22 pm |
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Hi, thanks for your replies. I never really noticed the bicep at all, but now that you pointed it out, it is very prominent.
I didn't want to smooth it out because I was afriad it would take away from the sketchyness of the pic. Oh well, I'll have to give it a go.
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