[schwinn]

Still working out some bugs with her right hand and with the troll's shadows. Any crits are welcome. Haven't decided if I am going to color her. I think she looks kinda cool in black and white.

later

[Dives]

nice. I think maybe ger legs are too long. Also the lower part of the leg is really weird it keeps getting thinner and thinnger add some muscles to the lower aprt of the leg. Luv everything else. Especially the topic. :P

[funkylizard]

I like the image. Very stylized! I see a problem with the right hand and arm though....the arm seems a bit to stiff and the hand isn't defined enough. Otherwise, it looks good and I agree about the black and white looking good on it!

Great work!

BTW, this is my first post since I just found this place! I will be posting my own stuff soon so it can be torn to shreads

Funkylizard

[Bert1221]

Oh baby!!!
Rrrrrrrrrrrrrr...........

Very nice picture!!

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Have a fraggin' nice day!!

[schwinn]

Hey thanks for the crits. The leg is too skinny now that I look at it and That hand needs work. Keep the crits coming. Helps alot.

later

[Awetopsy]

That looks like Pamela....

tell me... do all troll training females dress like that?

Still nice pic.. only thing is that her upper arm looks to short.. if you were to rotate it down, the elbow should line up with the waist... I kinda like the long legs..

also you should see some of the upper arm of the right arm and and loosen up that grip a bit... she strangling the poor troll...

nice work thou...

[This message has been edited by Awetopsy (edited December 11, 2000).]

[schwinn]

I have since reworked the legs. They look a lot better now. Her arm looks off, maybe because her shoulder is tipped up, causing her elbow to look high. I am going to leave that part. Any resemblance to Pamela is coincedental. i will post the new one in a couple days.