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sprout member
Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 107 Location: VA
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 11:34 am |
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well... still haven't overcome my artist's block... so I decided I'd draw justin kramer... [hope you don't mind :\ if you have a problem with it, I'll remove it] got the picture from his post: http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/007460.html
I don't do more realistic drawing very much, so this was a bit of a challenge, all in all it took me about 15-25 minutes...
let me know what you think
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[This message has been edited by sprout (edited December 09, 2000).] |
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Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 107 Location: VA
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 2:35 pm |
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after I set the picture down for about an hour or so, I figured out that the lips and cheek to the right, are horribly messed up... I started working on them, but I went shopping for my girlfriend... and I didn't get to finish it, right now I'm at my friend's house, and I'll finish it later tonight =D it was really fun doing it... thanks for being an interesting subject justin =]
later =D
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atomicz junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Dec 2000 Posts: 1 Location: Washington, DC, USA
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 3:03 pm |
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I think you should look at the eyebrows. I think if you concentrate on the angle of the face in relation to the eyebrows I think you will have an excellent picture. Also take a look at the pupils. They seem to be looking at different things. I would also remove the crease from the nose bridge area. That area should be shade I think. When doing life drawings I think it is a good practice to use guides. The guides will help you line up the eyebrows and the pupils. Great freehand work.
Nice job though
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Justin Kramer member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 2000 Posts: 143 Location: Ithaca, NY
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 12:09 am |
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er... interesting subject for a drawing
doesn't exactly look like me (not that it should--you don't actually know what I look like!), but decent linework. Adding shading would make it look more three-dimensional.
don't forget to draw from life, too!
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