[tofjell]

I need some feedback on a picture I started to draw. Be gentle, it's my third picture using a wacom. On second thoughts, just be honest.
http://194.248.142.227/homes/mountainrange.jpg


thanks in advance,
Tommy

[nova]

very nice job, for a third timer

hm. ok, i'll be honest.

i really like the coloring on the mountain intself, but when you reach the treeline thing at the bottom, there's less depth than there should be. and i suggest adding more shadows to the image in general, even though the washed out look is very appealing. there's no anatomy to comment on, so my critique ends here



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[EviLToYLeT]

Very nicely done. I think it would be interesting if you put in some lighting .... perhaps a sunset so you can experiment and figure out lighting as well(with colored sources). Anyway, I like the way you did the very two left mountains... but as you move over to the right it seems that you ran out of ideas and went for that ridge down the middle over and over. Also, pretty cool as I can see the rock showing through. But that big grey splotch at the bottom where the rock shows through... think it needs to be darker and maybe patches of snow over it a bit. Keep in mind the rock underneath is actually a dark grey, except the think layer of snow gives it a light grey appareance. Really like it so far, I suggest that you take time and perhaps enhance the picture with ski lifts, trees, skiers (you cfan experiment with snow clouds) and so forth. Very promising!