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futureskully
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 1:32 am     Reply with quote

(If you don't see a picture reload or come back later the server probably sucks at the moment)

Thanks to all that commented on my other art work...still learning and have been doing this for a bit...
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Nex
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 4:17 am     Reply with quote
Very moody, I like it .. but the figure looks (thanks to poser) VERY stiff maybe you can work on that pose more and get it a bit more relaxed (I guess its the position of the spear).
Also I'd not put the figure in the dead center but a bit off.

Just my opinion

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Matt Elder
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 6:16 am     Reply with quote
I agree with Nex, very moody and it has a cool atmosphere to it. I think the character stands out a little too much as it has a different level of realisim to it than the background. I think one reason is because (torso in particular), the image is grainy apart from the character which is particularly smoonth. Maybe if you hit the guy with some "noise/grains" in photoshop, this might help a little. The upper chest looks funny. The 'breasts' don't appear to be large enough for a woman's while they don't have the right shape to be a male's chest. The image is kinda inbetween.

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CyberLink
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 6:27 am     Reply with quote
I agree with people the idea is cool But it seems like the central figure is composed from separate parts - horse, hands, chest and head. Probably it is because of the tones - ex. lights and shadows on the chest and right arm are different and makes the person think that it's not solid body

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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 6:35 am     Reply with quote
With the way you positioned everything, the minotaur kid of looks small. You may want to move him up closer to the camera or something to the sort. Also, you might want to study minotaur anatomy i guess, just do a search for it on the net. The minotaur looks 3d rendered....as the arms and body look seperate. as cyber link said, not a solid body. also, his hands aren't even grasped right around the stick, and yah, the minotaur goes kind of stand out a bit too much. The feet of it should not be completely black as well.
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sacrelicious
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 11:14 am     Reply with quote
Ummm, ToYLeT... I think the centaur is a her, not a him. The boobs are a dead giveaway. And Matt, not all women have large breasts. That only happens in Sijunland.

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Dives
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 12:13 am     Reply with quote
Well not the kind of pick i like to see but you have talent.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 06, 2000 11:52 pm     Reply with quote
that's from B@D ... isn't it? I think I remember entering that contest... I made something stupid, because I wasn't allowed to win--because I had already won... anyway... looks good man, I like the poser figures... you always seem to find a place for those guys =] keep it up fh [see you in #graphics]

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