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br0un0
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 Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 2:58 am |
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hey hey, i'm actually drawing a comic book...here is a preview image of how it could look like...
tell me how you feel it...
that guy is "ded, the psyko mutant"... 
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Solitaire
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:20 am |
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cool I like it - that's sort of the style I have to go with when doing a comic idea a friend of mine just handed in 
well you inspired me thanx |
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The Dude
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 4:19 am |
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br0un0 you rock!
You also inspired me too. The smoke trail
from his gun is great, and nice detail like
your wired pic (which is now my background).
Once question...where did that dead guy on
the bottom get Lobo's jacket ?
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TweeK
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 4:52 am |
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Lookin' might cool. background's done really cool, no critics at all!
can't wait to see the rest
greetz
Jeff |
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br0un0
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:54 am |
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many thanx!!
your comments give me strength... Because, I never took any artistic lessons, or else... I'm actually doing a shitty job (in the e-business field...  ) and i put all my hopes in this comic book...
i'll post soon some other stuff... (i may need your comments for the first page)
M. Lebowski, that's great you saw the Lobo jacket, i'm a fan... I'll try to had more and more hidden stuff, since i have so many inspirations... you see, the skull is a logo from a english drum n'bass music label called, "metalheadz"...
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 7:57 pm |
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| Really like your style... but usually when people are in midair shooting, they dont stop till they hit the ground. I think of this kind of scene more as an action scene so might be nice if you still have the guns going off with yellow flashes. by having the yellow flashes, you can add a little bit more lighting. some parts are looking a little dull. May want to tech up the assasin guy up a bit. Looks a little plain wearing just a jumpsuit But all in all, great pic. I kinda feel sorry for the poor lad against the wall |
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TurboYVR
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 8:23 pm |
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| looks kinda like KoRn's anime style... i love it! the name reminds me of Johnny the Homicidal Maniac, btw... |
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