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Topic : "Juvenille, Tell me what you think." |
low_stress junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2000 Posts: 4 Location: So Cal California
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 4:46 pm |
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Hello, this is my first post on the internet. I just started painting on the computer about a week ago. I am very impressed by the work I see on this message board. And I would be honored to join in. Any "creative" critics would be appreciated. Keep in mind I am a beginner, and this is my 1st image.
[This message has been edited by low_stress (edited December 05, 2000).]
I'm sorry I'm having problems posting, you can see the images temporarily at http://www.100megsfree.com/5001flavors/
Thanks
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daz199 member
Member # Joined: 30 Dec 1999 Posts: 415 Location: Surrey, BC, Canada
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 4:52 pm |
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the coloring and shading is very nice.....
but u need to work on the anatomy, especially the face
and it doesn't look like juvenile eitha
woday
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Spydur member
Member # Joined: 30 Nov 2000 Posts: 70 Location: San Pablo, Ca
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 4:52 pm |
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Looks like a white box with an "X" in it.
I did the same thing last week with my first ever post. |
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synj member
Member # Joined: 02 Apr 2000 Posts: 1483 Location: San Diego
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:08 pm |
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looks neat. i enjoy the style and strokes used in creating it. i dont really have any strong criticism, which is actually a good thing. keep up the good work!
-synj www.synj.net |
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low_stress junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2000 Posts: 4 Location: So Cal California
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 5:33 pm |
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Ok, I forget to mention above that I need some help on finishing the image. I'm haiving trouble bringing my paintings/drawings to a finish. I usually can get an image to this point, but what should I do to bring it home.
I know it doesnt favor juvenile, but I am still overwelmed(sp) with the whole computer thing, im more concerned with value, color, and form.
Thanks.
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