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Tweeder
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 Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2000 9:58 pm |
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I decided to completley start over on this one .. last time I screwed up the lines, this time I think I screwed up the shading even more than before. Any thoughts?
hi-res - http://tweeder.envador.com/art/goddess.jpg
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LordArioch
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 12:10 am |
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Got some basic problems with the anatomy... the head is a bit lopsized. Make sure you're drawing on a surface that's perpendicular to your eyes... my doodles sometimes get lopsided like that when I draw on a flat surface with my head away back from the table.
Remember to assemble your figure from primitive shapes. Here's a little sketch to get you in the right direction.
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Solitaire
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| Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2000 3:17 am |
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stick to L.Ariochs advice - you avoid most mistakes by sketching and losing some thoughts of anatomical "habits".
Also positioning and the whole comp can change in a sketch phase...
remembering your title I think her pose doesn't fit - she looks shy (that comment only counts if title isn't meant ironicly  ) |
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