[krossgrus]

hello. first post under my new improved silly nick! (well actually an old nick, just not used here)

here's a bunch of stuff I've done when not working (I've done about 1050 textures for the futuristic racing game "Ballistics" for Grin.Inc ..so I've been busy )

1. I was just doodling around doing some anatomy practising. 3nights later I'm so sick of this picture now I need to take a break from it. Please give me some advise on what and how to improve on it. I have problems drawing hands.. and faces.. and I'm not sure about the torso or the lower leg (looks a bit flat). and the grass is uggly too, any tips? AAARRRGHGHG

2. A really flat shitty face. I saw a coke-poster with some nice colors I wanted to use..

3. Really quick b&w done some night when I couldn't sleep

4. This is how my pictures usually start..

5. I went to a filmfestival and saw 4 HK actionmovies in a row (from 11pm to 7am). the next/later that day my friend Robban asked me to come up with something to animate

6. More B&W doodling


soundtrack: http://www.student.hig.se/~kp99aln/krossgrus_ninjaslakt.mp3










/alex.

[NeoFun]

Pretty awsome art... The best one is the guy dragging the chick by her hair while pulling out his sword... Do a larger version of that! The first picture appears to have its largest problems in the area of lighting. What is going on with the ground? Where is that light coming from? Why aren't any shadows being cast by her or her sword? I really love how you did her hair. Whatever anyone may say-- don't change it! What is going on with her crotch though? I'm not quiet certian if we would see that much of it or even if we should be able to see it from this angle at all. You might also want to do something about her right arm-band since it feels too flat, and the shadow from her left arm seems to uniform as if it were cast upon a flat surface. Keep up the good work

[A.Buttle]

Why only 33.33%? Why not go for the full 100?

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[MaLoRuM]

first.... the hair on the top picture is so friggin fuckin cool. Truly an awesome rendition. I also like the style you drew her features in, gives it kind of an asian look. I agree with the previous post i think the biggest problem with the pic is the lighting, fix that and it'll be 100% better! Post more Post more!

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[afex]

Nice picture dude, i would give suggestions on face and hands, but i have some trouble with those parts as well. I like the breasts very nice looking, only thing that throws me off in the 1st pictures is the Hair in her arm pits, thats just nasty.
The second picture is nice as well, the face is pretty good in this one and that hair kicks mad ass, good job.

[Xcal]

Oh-mah-gawd... look at her armpit hair hehehe

[krossgrus]

hahaa! thank you very much for the comments! I�ll have a final go at the sword pic when I come home from this animation course (yipee, animation!)

And why is everyone so upset about the armpit hair? It�s natural (btw, if you zoom in on it you can see that I started it in the same style as the real hair, hehehe)

also a huge thanx to the ppl who mailed me and asked for more music!! here�s some crazy stuff:

http://www.student.hig.se/~kp99aln/krossgrus_superknas.mp3 perhaps my most melodic one

http://www.student.hig.se/~kp99aln/krossgrus_rxxxa_med_snor.mp3 playing around with some wicked beats, not really finished

http://www.student.hig.se/~kp99aln/krossgrus_krigstechno.mp3 hard bassline and drums that sound abit like some prodigy song i think

[bloodsugar]

I love the first one though it looks unfinished... kinda reminded me of pictures in tarot cards...

Actually I think you might want to leave it be after you shave her armpits ;P

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