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Dakkan
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 Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 8:16 pm |
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hi, here's a pic i just stopped working on, and i was wondering what was wrong with it. i've been swamped with college work lately and haven't been able to put my full focus on this pic. crits/comments appreciated. thanks..
(btw, thought it somehow fit into the drawclub catagory, so i used it as an entry. that's why i named it "showdown.jpg", hehe, i'm terrible with coming up with names)
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 8:38 pm |
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| The two right pillars.. light source is wrong. And also, I really can't figure out what the guy's doing. Either he's sitting, and holding up his arms... or running aroudn with his arms up. Otherwise, I like the way it's coming along... and if there's a light source, the fog should be lighter. |
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Dakkan
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| Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 8:57 pm |
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| well, the fog's covering up part of his legs, but i made him kneeling on one knee... |
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Dakkan
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| Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2000 6:51 am |
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i posted a pic of just the guy, so the pose would be a bit clearer.
[This message has been edited by Dakkan (edited November 27, 2000).] |
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