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dr . bang
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hard work were put into this, please tell me what you think. Thanks
[This message has been edited by dr . bang (edited November 24, 2000).] |
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 8:34 pm |
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| Very nice mood to it. I suggest you smooth out the lines on the two ninjas and also add a little reflection to the swords.... as they ARE made outta metal. |
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FatPenguin
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 8:39 pm |
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I'm not quite sure how the ninja on the right got into that position, but overall a really nice painting!
I would suggest working on the water a little though. The ripples on the far left and right look a bit odd. I think it might look better with them removed completely |
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Isric
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 8:42 pm |
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| hahahaha! Thats great! It looks like they've been thrown at each other! hahaha! |
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Transcendence
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 9:26 pm |
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| I dont like the lines of movement behind the bodies and the ripples might be more appropriate if they were softened some.. |
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 9:32 pm |
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Maybe try getting a little more out of your poses. They seem a little strange.
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TurboYVR
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 10:42 pm |
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Ninja1 : the way the sword is posed is better in the original than in anticz's suggestion, but I agree the line of motion is a little off.
Ninja2 : i have no idea what THIS guy's doing. He's just asking to get killed.. either that, or he's impale himself when he eventually lands on his ass. I can't see anyone wielding a sword and jumping in like this... |
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 10:48 pm |
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rofl.  |
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dr . bang
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| Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2000 9:25 am |
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HAHA, thanks for all the comment guy, it the pic wasnt that strange when i finish it.
for RIGHT Ninja, i tried to make a powerful pose, like he's gonna hit hard, so i though of baseball+jumping = weird pose.
i think it doesnt matter how he got into that position because in chinese kunfu movie, they're like that all the time.
haha. i'm too lazy to fix this pic right now, probably sometime soon |
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| Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2000 12:29 am |
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and is anyone here an expert on fighting tactics? I know a lot about fighting and stuff and the ninja on the right has a smart position he can do a strike from down and slash upwards. The ninja on the left has his sword the wrong way that means he is about to be cut in half. if he would have it the right way he could attack from above and parry the right ninjas blow from any angle. Now it looks like he is going to shove it throught the right ninjas sotmach.
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