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 Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 6:52 pm |
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Hi there guys,
first just let me say I am staggered by the
high quality of much of the work posted here.
Whoa! 
This is something I did in my spare time,
I hope you feel it belongs here....
Cheers, A. |
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Delucubus
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 7:00 pm |
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| Woa! a one legged mercenary, but really, welcome man (or woman). |
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Rob M
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 7:08 pm |
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Yes, welcome to the forums!
Now if I might add a possible monologue for this pic:
Merc: "OK, hold it right there buddy"
Bad guy: "Oh hell! It's Stumpy! How' you find me?"
Merc: "You stole my prosthetic leg, I had a tracer installed in it. It was only too easy to track you!"
OK, I know, I'm retarded...
Seriously though, You might want to define that back leg a little more. I assume that she's actually got her foot propped against the wall behind her. There's no real indication of that. Maybe make it more obvious.
[This message has been edited by Rob M (edited November 24, 2000).] |
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 7:14 pm |
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HEy! Welcome to the forum. Heh... in fact i'll be traveling down to australia later this summer
Anyway... back to the picture. How come that shadow on the wall isn't on the girl? I find that a bit confusing...
and also, i recommend you redo the line areas with the pen tool.. you'll get a better image. |
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Rinaldo
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 10:32 pm |
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hiya A, Where 'bouts in Australia to you hail from?
I like your pic, and you have some nice stuff on your site.
you seem to be suffering from some jpeg compression tho. the navigation images on your site are full of artifacts. I'd rather wait the extra time to see a nice clean image than get something which is a good as this, but ultimatly not as good as it could be
just MHO. |
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Axl
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| Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2000 8:10 am |
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| Like the pic. A little bit of Masamune Shirow influence possibly. Even though I can see that her right leg is tucked up it could be hard to see that as pointed out in some of the other posts. Just a suggestion but you could bring her foot out to the right to make it clearer where the bottom half of her leg is. |
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Bubonic
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| Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2000 9:16 am |
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Real nice pic man, nice composition, and i like the car added on and that one way sign.. only thing is...
Is she trying to pull a superman/batman thing, by putting her underwear on the outside? |
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