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elam
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 Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 8:26 pm |
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Howdy folks..
Trying to be a bit spontaneous with this one. Still can't figure out the cloth/skirt thing. Folds etc. Comments welcome.
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 8:45 pm |
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WEll... very nice atmosphere to it. As for your folds and so forth... it really depends on how you want it to look. For example... right now it looks really tight and seems that his skirt is very small and stretched across the legs. You usually want to add some folds going downwards in the area between the legs. And also some more where the fabric is being stretched. hope it helps..... and someone do please correct me if im wrong.
[edit] by the way, the bottom of the skirt shouldn't be a straight line [/edit]
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SporQ
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 9:55 pm |
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here's about 5 mins worth of touch up.
the middle of the skirt should be hanging loosely and bunched up at the hips. it should be more taut on the thighs. also, the perspective seemed wrong on the top of the door and the ceiling line...
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