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Topic : "[crit] My colors on a phoenix sketch." |
FrageNSTEIN junior member
Member # Joined: 21 Nov 2000 Posts: 39 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma, USA
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 5:27 pm |
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I had the sketch from the pro sketchbooks at www.wizardworld.com . I forget the artists last name, but he did a great job. I decided to color it so here it is:
Critiques please.
Drew "FrageNSTEIN" Haynes |
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nori member
Member # Joined: 01 Apr 2000 Posts: 500 Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 5:47 pm |
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visigothan likes big tits. |
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FrageNSTEIN junior member
Member # Joined: 21 Nov 2000 Posts: 39 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma, USA
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 6:03 pm |
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Me too, but I actually didn't mean to amke it look like that.
Drew |
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 6:04 pm |
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Well, I gave you a crit in your other thread about this one when you first started. It looks like you didn't read it. |
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faustgfx member
Member # Joined: 15 Mar 2000 Posts: 4833 Location: unfortunately, very near you.
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 6:25 pm |
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big breasts are a bad thing! bad!
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FrageNSTEIN junior member
Member # Joined: 21 Nov 2000 Posts: 39 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma, USA
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 6:44 pm |
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Hey Chapel. I did read it last time. THX alot.
Drew |
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Delucubus member
Member # Joined: 12 Oct 2000 Posts: 127 Location: Chico, CA
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 6:58 pm |
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Hey Frage, I really like the skin tone you gave her. Kinda a darker non-caucasion(sp?) feel.
But one thing, that bar she's leaning on looks flat. I would shade it a bit to make it look like it's actually round. Unless it's supposed to be flat, I don't no. Also another thing, I remember seeing the older pic you did and I still feel the color on her lips look a little strange. Is she wearing yellowish lipstick or is there a yellow light hitting them? I think it's because of the way the yellow and black are on her lips. But then again, maybe that is what you were going for, either way it looks great. |
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galen member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2000 Posts: 172 Location: a computer.
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