| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Topic : "After the car crash..." |
Tiger Eaten
member
Member #
Joined: 17 Nov 2000
Posts: 226
Location: Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
|
 Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 3:59 pm |
 |
 |
"I'm sorry the doctors were unable to save your right arm....or the left, or your legs, hips and torso......errr........but you're alive! Alive! With many, many years ahead of you! Isn't that wonderful honey?!"
Any tips on making this thing a little more 3d? A tad bit more real? Oh and I do beg forgiveness for the mess with dodge and burn.....er...I won't do that anymore.
------------------
ROAR! CHOMP! MUNCH! (You've been tiger eaten!) |
|
| Back to top |
|
AdezJ
member
Member #
Joined: 22 Oct 1999
Posts: 220
Location: Sweden! (Gothenburg)
|
| Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 5:25 pm |
|
|
Hey cool art 
to get it more 3d i think u have to give some parts of the picture sharper edges.
Keep up the good work!
/Adezj |
|
| Back to top |
|
Tiger Eaten
member
Member #
Joined: 17 Nov 2000
Posts: 226
Location: Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
|
| Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2000 10:36 pm |
|
|
Thanks AdezJ! I'd like to be one of those people that says......."Oh, this is something I just whipped up in the last 40 minutes or so". But the truth is, I really have to work to get even this (VERY FAIR) result. It's wonderful to hear something positive back. I will try and sharpen things up some.
------------------
ROAR! CHOMP! MUNCH! (You've been tiger eaten!) |
|
| Back to top |
|
Tiger Eaten
member
Member #
Joined: 17 Nov 2000
Posts: 226
Location: Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
|
| Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 3:32 am |
|
|
Errrr.....anyone else?
------------------
ROAR! CHOMP! MUNCH! (You've been tiger eaten!) |
|
| Back to top |
|
Matt Elder
member
Member #
Joined: 15 Jan 2000
Posts: 641
Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
|
| Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2000 4:15 am |
|
|
I like some of the things that you have goin' on in this image. The background is cool too. The thing that struck me as a little 'unfinished' was the top left hand side of the characters head. It just seems to gooey and looks like it is about to slide of its head. What I'd recommend is working some of those thin black lines into the image a little more as they just seem a little too 'cartoony' at the moment.
As much as I like the spine, how are the vertebre being held together as at the moment they appear to be floating.
------------------
See ya on da flip side
Matt
http://www.mattelder.com |
|
| Back to top |
|
Tiger Eaten
member
Member #
Joined: 17 Nov 2000
Posts: 226
Location: Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
|
| Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2000 6:41 am |
|
|
Thanks Matt! You know I think I pulled a total blank on that spine after I first sketched it down. Really should go back and finish that off. Maybe it's a magic spine?
------------------
ROAR! CHOMP! MUNCH! (You've been tiger eaten!) |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
