[Crayzee]

[This message has been edited by Crayzee (edited November 18, 2000).]

[Plouffe]

your link doesnt work ... just brings you to a yahoo meesage that says the link isnt found or doesnt exist?

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"An artist cannot fail; it is a success to be one."
-Charles Horton Cooley

[Art Addiction]

Color it color it color it color it!!!!!!!

- Brian

[Brue]

i think it needs clothes j/k.
But her right arm is too thick while going behind her head. By the time a hand was put on her wrist would be the size of her ankle.
Thats all i would change

[Jezebel]

Anyone else see a face in that? Hehe...



Maybe it's just me ^_^

-Beth

[Justin Kramer]

her belly button kind of looks like an almond. also, the line style doesn't look entirely consistent--sometimes it's anti-aliased looking (body outline) and sometimes it's not (ear, eyes). Good proportions, assuming it wasn't traced

[galen]

is it computer or inked pencil???

i did this awhile back in a life drawing class:

i know its somewhat inaccurate anatomy wise, as her head is really borderline too small...

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or you can dream of the frog legs sitting in the church, with the glass and the sand by my footsteps

[shardik]

GALEN YOU BASTARD!!!, the only models we get for life drawing class are 400 lb fat guys named Altoid Joe and an old guy named Floyd

[galen]

yeah, my life drawing class ruled

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or you can dream of the frog legs sitting in the church, with the glass and the sand by my footsteps

[Solitaire]

upps

[This message has been edited by Solitaire (edited November 19, 2000).]

[Solitaire]

I've no time for our life drawing corse (have a job next to my studies).

nice study Galen

crazee, don't mind me, sketcheing my suggestions






[This message has been edited by Solitaire (edited November 19, 2000).]

[Speve-o-matic]

Besides the small anatomy problems, I would just refine the line work. The roughness doesn't mix well with the contours of the figure.

- Steve

[Crayzee]

It is just a beginning work. I painted it in about an hour so please remark this point. But i thank you all for your critics, so go on

[Solitaire]

Hey Crayzee, which city are ya from?

[Crayzee]

The city is a village and is called Brekendorf. It is near Kiel.

[Solitaire]

cool, I'm living in next to Norderstedt (south of Schleswig-Holstein); well that belongs to Hamburg (economicly) .

[Crayzee]

This is for you Brian

I put a little of color on it, but it is very incomplete, just enough to have a first impression - I'll keep on working

please write what you think about the colors and give me some hints. :-)

[This message has been edited by Crayzee (edited November 19, 2000).]

[Crayzee]

Come on please.

[Solitaire]

well, put some shading and lighting on her - monotone looks boring! And why not painting onto the lineart, as she isn't looking like a comic...

[Crayzee]

well, as i said, it is incomplete and the lines will disapear in the final version they are just for my orientation.

[Solitaire]

So what do you want a critique for ...?