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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 12:51 am |
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Damn you guys reply quick...
I've done a couple of changes.
The length between the nose and mouth is longer and i've added some details on
the eye+some colour shanges.
Hope it looks better
It was not intended to be a girl and it was not suppose to be a selfportrait either.
I guess all those selfportraits must have affected me somehow
Cos: I'm sorry, but i only saved one time until i posted it. I only have it in a higher resolution.
Optical: what?! NO, i don't look like Brandon Lee, hehe My father don't really look like Bruce Lee either, he had the same haircut sometime in the 70's and in one of Beet's drawings i saw some slight resemblance.
Frost: He he, no worries, mate
Any more suggestion on what i could do more in order to make the person look like a man?
Cheers,
Micke
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[This message has been edited by micke (edited January 04, 2001).] |
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 12:54 am |
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Not Brandon Lee.. Jason Scott Lee. The guy who played Bruce Lee in the movie "Dragon: The Bruce Lee Story" Great movie by the way.. one of my all time favorites. |
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micke member
Member # Joined: 19 Jan 2000 Posts: 1666 Location: Oslo/Norway
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 3:03 am |
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Argh!
Please stop it with this Brandon/Jason Lee
stuff!!
Kjetil: Vet ikke enn�...H�per det. Glad at du likte det Det er det f�rste jeg har lagd p� lenge.
Solitaire: it just ended up the way it is.
I did'nt have a clear idea of it from the start, so i just did it. I did'nt use a mirror or referance, so i's a coincidence
if there are any simillarity. I don't see any likeness in it though.
Anthony: i left the nose alone with the hatching because it normally is more smoother and shiny than the rest.
Frost:Thank you and i agree with you too. I It's easy to turn it in to a stereotype, so i think that i'll just leave it. You have valid and good points and i think you know a great deal about anatomy/proportions and faces. Don't be so hard on yourself, your'e a great artist
spoogedemon:
Thank you. I did'nt know what you were gonna make out of it. I tried avoiding making things without a reason for it. I have a tendency of making my stuff look too "edgy" and sharp and having trouble loosening up.
I'll try and make it more simple and soft.
You can feel free to try to experiment with it if you want. That would help me out a great deal. Thank you for the crits
Thanks for the comments everybody!
I have too much to do today so i'll probably not gonna be able to work on it until tomorrow, but i'll post it as soon as possible.
Mikael
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Member # Joined: 09 Dec 2000 Posts: 115 Location: NutSac, California
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 3:09 am |
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Ahh the eyes, the eyes. You have captured the eyes of Christopher Walken and put them into paint.
Scary indeed!
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A.Buttle member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 3:36 pm |
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Eh, it's good and all, but the colors just seem a little bland to me. It's all mid range values. Give us some more tonal contrast, micke.
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