[Delucubus]

Ok, if everyone isn't sick of angels already, here's mine. I finaly got to finishing this after seeing everyone else's angels. But i'm still new to this, so please crit!



Can you especially give pointers on his form. I've never taken any classes or anything. I'm doing his form basically on observations and just what i THINK looks right(which usually isn't).


[This message has been edited by Delucubus (edited October 24, 2000).]

[Jaymo]

The wings start on the back of his head, his knee is inside his boot/his leg is too short, his facial perspective is messed up...
I don't mean to be rude. Your choice of colors is ok, the lighting is good for a start, you even put some reflection in it. I'd recommend you reading something on anatomy and perspective, this is where you do the most mistakes. You can also pose in front of a mirror to get the overall pose you are going for.
I'm not the best at this, but since noone else replied I hope you are happy with it.

[Axl]

Hello Delucubus. The first thing I noticed was the length of the arms. If you look at someone and draw a line horizontally where their waist/belly button is you can see that their elbow or the bootom of their bicep lies roughly along the same line.
The forearm from elbow to wrist is slightly shorter than the top of the arm [shoulder to elbow].
The left knee is hard to see, it looks as though he has a very short left leg.
I hope this helps a little.

[Delucubus]

Thanks for all the comments. But about his knees, his boots are supposed to be higher than his knees, like shingaurds or something. This is why you really can't see his knees, also why the stick thats breaking is sorta behind the part of the boot that is above the knee. Thats what i was kinda going for, but maybe i portrayed it wrong, i dont know.

[Jaymo]

If these are overknee-boots, you rendered the lower leg too short. Try that mirror thingee...