[Kyri]

Hi,
I've been working on some new character concepts, this is one
of them, criticisms, coments are welcome, cheers.

Kyri
http://www.freespeech.org/darkpathimages







[This message has been edited by Kyri (edited October 19, 2000).]

[Kyri]

O.k people, that's enough now, please stop posting on this topic otherwise your gonna crash Dhabis board here...no, no, I mean it stop! Heh, heh.
Man, you gotta have a thick hide to put stuff here.

[Liquid!]

Kyri-

Nice paintings! The full figure has a slight Simon Bisley look to it, while the close up reminds me of someone else who I can't think of right now... Keep an eye on your shoulder bicep connection and I would give her right eye in the close up a bit more 'depth'. Also, where's the 'x' that's like my favorite part... Either way I really like both of them, really scary... Awesome style!

As a far as getting posts... Maybe its the TITLE 'NEW ONES'...?!? D'oh. How about "KILLER ZOMBIE BITCH", or "BABE w/ STICHES AND GUN" ... Damn.

[BooMSticK]

Hey Kyri,

Nice posting. It shows really good technique I think. I have really no points to critize other than the full figure pose seems a little boring. But thenagain...it looks like a charactersheet which should just make clear how the char looks...

the portrait is pretty darn cool..

we want more....
;B

[Sumaleth]

Looks more like John Mueller's style than the Biz to me, especially the first one.

Nice either way.

Row.

[exo]

Second pic:
The chin look a bit small concidering the size of the lips. The left eye seem a bit to small. Maybe it's just me.

Neat pics tho

Oh. Yeah. First time here so i guess i should say hello.

//exo

[Frost]

Cool stuff Kyri (as usual). =) I think the jaws need a little chopping off IMHO.

[Lukias]

Put 'Fuck with me' across her breasts, or 'How about a lead filling'

Anyhow's looks like a tuff bitch

Bisely'ish - brom'ish, mueller'ish....
.....all good

[Wildkat]

Another great character in your series!
she shows lots of strength...
Love your style, as always and can't wait to see more!

[shahar2k]

her face reminds me in it's proportions of sigourni weiver.... if I could spell her name(Ripley from Alien)

[Sedone]

I really dig the style. Very textural. I like the proportions on this character more than the one you posted a while back, but there's still some parts that seem a bit off. I think that would really help out your art. It's weird, but her legs almost remind me of a texture map.

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[Kyri]

Hi, guys, I've been trying to post a reply here, for a while now and
it hasn't been letting me, not sure what the problem is...very wierd.

O.k, I know this is very late arriving, but anyway this is what I
was gonna say:


Hi, Thanks for responding.
Liquid, thanks, Bisley is the king man and I love his stuff...and know I have been influenced greatly by his style,
he is awesome.That guy is so quick and leauges ahead. Although haven't been keeping up with what he's been up to lately, does anyone
out there know?
Yeah, I've noticed that I usually have trouble with the shoulder bicept connection on a lot of my figures, I need to work on that.
Thanks for pointing that out.

Hey Boomstick, nice one man, cheers. My poses are generaly very boring and stiff, another thing to work on, heh.

Cheers Row, I like Mueller's stuff, he has done some awesome gritty work.

Hi Exo, Cheers.

Frosty, thanks man, that's much appreciated. I think the jaw
does need chopping along with a lot of other bits, heh, heh...That pic has given me a lot of trouble right from the start and I have been coming back to it continuesly saying, how come I never noticed that bit and that needs to change...I think I'm gonna work
on it some more and maybe put it here.

Kat Thank's so much. I'm really glad you like the character, I seem to do a lot of them, heh, heh.

Lukias , cool idea to put something tough written on her shirt. Nice one.

Sigourni, hmmmm, not sure, I see it, but maybe something of her in it.

Sedone, thanks a lot man, I def agree the anatomy is dodgy in places,
and the legs need a lot more work.

Kyri
http://www.freespeech.org/darkpathimages

I've worked on the pic some more and made some changes, but not really sure about the background, any advice or suggestions
would be greatly appreciated or if anyone wants to have a stab at doing a background, please do.

[EviLToYLeT]

Think there isn't enough depth on the pants in the first picture and the perspective on the gun is a bit ... odd. The background looks fine, but can't tell what it is yet. Like the added fish skeleton touch

[Wildkat]

Kyri, nice addition to the pic!
not sure I see what Evil T. does tho.. looks like a mouse to me
and like she's saying... "dinners ready, come and get it"