Sijun Forums :: View topic - Hello, im new here but would like some feedback

Rarezbot · Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2000 11:27 pm

Hey there.. been a fan of digital art for a long time, mainly cause I cannot draw like most of you on this page. I am 19 and attending school for Digital Design at U Cincinnati in their DAAP program. Anyhow, I somewhat finished my website and would like any to look and just give me whatever thoughts. I see you all have alot to say and that is good, cause this community is pretty rapidly advancing each day. Dont be afraid, you wont hurt my feelings with whatever you say, so please be honest. On my site are websites, digital art, and how to contact me further. Thanks the website is http://www.e-izon.com

enjoy

-Jim Martis

Spooky · Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2000 11:30 pm

Nice work! I like the colors and the very techno feel to it. There are some things to check though.

1. On your Flash intro. The small font is a little illegible. I'm using Netscape on a Mac so possibly it's just me.
2. I think the word you are looking for is 'breathe' with an 'e'. You have 'breath'.

Otherwise, keep up the great work!

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Rarezbot · Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2000 11:47 pm

lol yea, im not an english major as you can see. And my other friend did have trouble on his mac reading the intro font. Ill look into it, thanks a buncha

CapnPyro · Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2000 11:51 pm

Sorry. i automatically close any site that's audacious enough to think that it can fill up my whole screen. my res. is 1600x1200, im usually doing several other things while looking at a website. from what i saw before i closed it it looked nice..

-Capn

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SporQ · Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2000 11:52 pm

awesome graphics. i really like the feel of it. my only complaint would be that every time you click something it either opens a new window, or resizes it. thats a big pet peeve of mine, but hey, it might just be me.

also, you should check out the dbm forum, http://www.designsbymark.com/dbmforum
there are a bunch of good artists there, and they mostly do web design, so you'll probably get more feedback.

SporQ

silber · Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2000 4:40 am

hi there
like the startscreen and the design much

I agree with sportq about the
''new window opens''

and I must say I don't like the little flash intro -it contains too much hecticness

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