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Masaccio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 2:33 am

didnt take very long
nothing much

comments are very welcome crits too
i havent drawn much lately. its about 50% done me thinx
rip it up fellas :P
P.S suggestions on what style or how i should go about doin the face.
peace

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micke · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 3:27 am

Hi Dave

I have some suggestions:
Why do you always leave out the face?
It's one of the most important areas in the piece. Did you use referance for this? If that is the case i would suggest that you use it as a base for creating the face if you're having problems with it.

Make the outer shapes of the whole girl more clean, so it will not break up the forms too much.
you need to be aware of what is happening
in the inner shapes.The way it is shaded now
makes the shapes misleading.try to analyse more what you see. Spending more time in the beginning and building up a strong structure will help you alot, worry about the shading afterwards.
Hope this can help.
-Micke

Masaccio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 4:40 pm

thankx alot micke

i dunno why i leave the face out
i have a theory that im afraid of doing em cause the alwayz look so shitty.
im trying to draw them but they are really hard
i luv the faces on your un coloured sketches. im studying your drawings at the moment...
peace

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Masaccio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 5:53 pm

slite improvement
not entriely happy with it

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Masaccio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 7:30 pm

just thought id post this
not worth another topic post.
this took about 30 mins.

its just a sketch dont worry

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jasonN · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 8:59 pm

Hey nice pic, is the top one Mandy Moore?

-Jason

Masaccio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 9:37 pm

YES
how the fuck did u know that?omg ureckonised i picture i drew
thats kewl!

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jasonN · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 10:04 pm

Hahahaha! I know everything!

Seriously though, I've just seen the pic before. Congrats on the likeness of the pic (besides the non existent face) hehehe

-jason

Masaccio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 10:35 pm

hehe ta

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Freddio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 11:42 pm

nNice work
Davo

Keep at the pic it will look really sweet by the end..

could you post the reference?

Freddio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 11:51 pm

Nice work

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Masaccio · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 11:54 pm

ffrrreeedddddyyyyyy

Ian · Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2000 1:05 am

The only thing I see is that she is not looking at you in your pic. Otherwise, looks good. FINISH. Wanna see your final piece. :0
E

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