Sijun Forums :: View topic - Just a new character im working on........

burn0ut · Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2000 9:48 pm

Okay any suggestions comments critiquez, whats wrong with this mofo and what should be in the background eh?! okay heres my masterpeice(heh. righhtt..)

n i think he needs sum shoez

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His hand would be fucked up pretty hard from holding the katana like that...hehe

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shardik · Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2000 9:50 pm

That dude has some huge feet, and how are his pants staying on? A cool character tho, maybe he should have some distinguishing mark on him like a tattoo or a scar or something

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burn0ut · Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2000 9:50 pm

theres a cover on it

see his thumb is like pushing out the blade alittle like hes goina go out to battle

Liquid! · Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2000 11:19 pm

Looks great. I would study the elbow connections in your arms a bit more... They pinch in a sort of weird way. Same with his right arm shoulder connection. Outside of that the hands are pretty cool, and I actually like big feet..

As far as a bg goes... hmmm, buddha temple with incense burning? I would generally recommend that you try to think of the picture as a whole. Not as (a) character and (b) background. When you think of them as separate items you end up with the problem of backgrounds that you have to 'paste'. Just some food for thought... damn do I ramble...

Hope that is useful... I'm sure FRED FLICK could offer more insight on anatomy and form that I ever could.

CapnPyro · Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2000 11:40 pm

only thing i noticed is the right arm is waaay to long. it's bent and the hand falls at the same place as the left. Other then that looks coolio.

i was thinkin a blurred out background. Maybe stone floor leading up to a temple, blue sky, all real blurry and out of focus. Maybe a some steps or a bridge. Dunno. I'm all for the out of focus look, i'm lazy

-Capn

burn0ut · Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2000 2:38 pm

thx peepz

liquid! : i like big feet to, to me it makes em more powerfull/ more weight to them... n i just like the style heh. Ill work on the elbow some more, mabye Fred could work out a quick sketch of how the elbow/arms would be placed better ehh how bout it fred ??

capn: the hands dont dont fall at the sameplace really, the tip of the fingers are about where the other hands nuckles start, i dunno if the arm is to long tho.

fred can i get a quick layout of his arms? only if u have time of course ! thx

thx people