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NeoFun
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 12:19 pm     Reply with quote
Gah... Tell me what you think and what I should fix, eh?

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mattready
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 1:13 pm     Reply with quote
very nice!

the only thing i would critique is to blend out your highlites and shadows a bit more.

if you scoot back and look at your drawings from across the room, you can see that the highlites look like weird white lines...not a smooth, blended highlite.

if you are using photoshop, try dropping the pressure setting on the airbrush to about 8-15%. this seems very lite, and you may have to "work and build up" a highlite or shadow more, but you result will be much more soft.

hope it helps!

i really like your cartoon/manga style.
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