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Vardelith
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 Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2000 8:38 pm |
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Just a quick spot to ask for comments on this small piece I've started working on! 
The lines are a little flakey looking due to the fact that I had to enhance them enough to post this first draft here.
I'm looking for c/c on this I want to start correcting any problems before I get into the painting of this image.
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Glenn T
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| Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2000 9:32 pm |
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I'm a pathetic artist at best, so my comments may be usefull, or absurd.
Fisrt, the hair on her right shoulder seems a bit off (like an uneven haircut), and her right elbow seems a little to fat.
If this helps, great! If not, i'm sorry 
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Vardelith
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| Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2000 11:19 pm |
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The Hair is just an outline for the general direction I'm wanting the hair to fall once it's painted in! it's basically a patch of hair from underneath the rest that is "sticking" to her sholder.
Hm....your right about the elbow I'd say.  Just a wee bit to big! Easy to fix! Just have to remember to do that when I work on the painting!
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shaithis
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2000 8:24 am |
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but is this taken from the Michael Whelan image with the girl walking into the foggy lake?
The pose looks similar.
Nothing wrong with that, mind you, but it might be a good idea to mention if that's the case.
The image I'm referring to, btw, is at http://www.glassonion.com/gallery/archive/fineart/causeway.jpg
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Vardelith
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2000 9:13 am |
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Nope! I saw a photograph the other day of a woman stepping out of a pool she was wearing a bathing suit (red) and it was a modern pool. I thought to myself at the time it would be cool to do a pic like that without the modern aspects! This is the beginning of that pic!
The general Idea is to have her stepping out of the pool and a servent (girl?) will be waiting on the one side! not too sure which yet! But I like to build up my pictures first so I'm working on the central element which is this woman! :P
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- Ha beat you there! 5 posts in one week! 
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Vardelith
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| Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2000 9:52 pm |
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Ok, here is a quick colorization of the idea minus a good background pic. I'm not to worried about the stuff on the top of the pic at this time.
Ok Here is my next attempt at fleshing out this pic! Comments PLEASE!b
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Vardelith
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| Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2000 9:27 pm |
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Ok, second generation of colorization up to view! C&C please! Ah, why not! please!!!!
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