[Superbug]

Guys i need ur help witht his pic. I have an idea, but I don't know where to take it. Right now he's holding the sword through him but he's smiling, and there are bodies all around him. How's the anatomy, contcept etc. Please tell me what u all think if u guys think. I hope so....

[Superbug]

What no one cares. okeyy, maybe if i was a grl ud flood this thread with comments

[SushiMaster]

Why's he smiling with a sword through his chest? I wouldn't be smilin' if I were him...

Once you've worked that out, the rest should come.

Daniel

[Frost]

Hey there Superbug.

Well, the drawing is lacking a lot of structure, in fact, I have trouble making what what is what, and what the rest of the image is suppose to be like.

Most of the lines are very sloppy, which I don't mean in a bad way, and it makes it hard to understand what you want this picture to be. You should probably clean up your sketch before trying to color it in, that way even you would have a better idea as to what the image is.

I think you should spend all of your time doing some line work to get a good base in it before going on coloring, as your line work is currently not developed enough. Don't leave things so sketchy, or at least, make sure that you have clean lines and not many, general shaped guides for your shapes -- right now all your sketch lines are of the same intensity and all dark... usually artists sketch very lightly to get base forms rolling, then clean it up and create good solid sketch lines to go on with the image.

I'm not saying that to put you down or discourage you, but I feel that is what you need to do before you can go on with image creation -- solid lines and a better sense of anatomy and shapes.

good luck!
frost.

[Superbug]

Thanks guys! yeah i kow about my lines. Ever since i got a wacom i tend not to sketch anymore. THat's bad.... I gota go back to the traditional scanning and sketching, but thats a pain in the ass. But i'll work it out. i'll get an update soon

[Superbug]

Dan, who HASN't seen akira. And if anybody hasn't...i hope u will. That's a really cool part. But my favourite part in it, is actually everything. One of the best animes ever. I love the coloring. So far ahead of its time

[above]

i cant say ive seen it

[Superbug]

above, u've never seen akira? Oh my......who else hasn't.....????!

[Haarg2]

Tutenkhamun. I expect.

[Superbug]

Here's an update....heading in the right directions guys?

[Dan]

Reminds me of Akira for some reason
If you have seen the movie, it's that scene where his robot arm starts to go berserk, just be fore he becomes a giant bloby thingy
You know what I'm talking about

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