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Francis · Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2000 8:23 pm

This is a quick remix of axl's original post of the female mechanic. Lots of anatomy and perspective badness (in my version), but what do you want for free?

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Francis Tsai
TeamGT Studios

Rob M · Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2000 8:31 pm

Oooohhh! Aaaaahhh!

I like your version a lot. Maybe better than the original. Since they're a lot different in style, it's probably the style change I like most.
(unless I've confused the images)

craig · Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2000 8:34 pm

ahem...this gal could work on me as much as she liked...heeheehee... cool Francis!

::Dino:: · Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2000 10:13 pm

Berry nice

Good use of tone. Great contrast aswell. I would love to offer more in the way of critique...but it's now 2:18am here in Toronto so I'm pretty pooped. Let's just say I owe u one

'nite

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Joachim · Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2000 11:38 pm

Ah nice Francis !
Damn, I need to start posting/doing more stuff than I've done lately

Btw, one comment. Everything looks nice and dandy except for that right arm she's lifting up. It doesn't feel like it's her arm but something behing her.Maybe you should connect it more to the body and also it looks a bit too big.

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dEATH.Tool · Guest Member #

Strangely the first thing that caught my interest was the buildings in the background! I really like this piece...though I never saw the original. But err...ahem! Anyone having car trouble? I just can't figure out why that damned battery keeps disconneting....hehehehe

DuKEZ · Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2000 12:57 am

First thing that caught my eye was her right arm (the arm thats up) seems odd to me.. i think the bicept segment is too long.. it doesnt really look like it connects to her body tho

or shoulders..

Put your hand on the screen and cover that arm is what i did tho :P makes her look better for me

Nice picture (or remake) Francis.. i havent seen the original yet tho ..

Axl · Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2000 9:58 am

Jeez! Nice work Francis, I'm flattered and slightly jealous. I think that your pic is alot sexier than mine the top and shorts look better as do her curves. I think that by not recreating a copy you've made this your own piece, good stuff.

Frost · Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2000 10:22 am

Wow Francis! That lighting is quite impressive, especially the part near her legs and left hand area. Very nice work! =)

Jenn · Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2000 2:35 pm

W00!@$ -liqs the monitor-

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Snake Grunger · Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2000 8:35 pm

I'd have to agree on everyone on this

Really nice work, MrTsai!

Joachim - You should concentrate on getting done with IGI and then post on the forum

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Francis · Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2000 8:53 pm

Yes, that right arm is where I started to lose interest in this pic. Also, my buddy Derek ( http://www.digitalderek.com ) pointed out that the head is kinda small, which it is. And overall, it is a little muddier and darker than I like.

And finally, I guess I should have just posted this in Axl's orignal thread, but I was too lazy to go look for it. Curse these new times where a post disappears in one day!! To clarify, the following is Axl's original art.

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Francis Tsai
TeamGT Studios

[This message has been edited by Francis (edited September 25, 2000).]

burn0ut · Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2000 9:04 pm

wow you friend derek has some nice work francis!

but damn i like how u draw women's faces! your sencond picture wont load for me so .. ~~~