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Darkmoon · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 2:11 am

tell me what ya think

-Lisa

jasonN · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 2:32 am

It looks cool

I like anime/manga (sorry I don't know the difference) a lot

I just think you should stretch her upper body a bit because it looks a little small.
I think you should finish it!
BTW: Nice head she's got there

-Jason

TeAnne · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 2:40 am

Yes finish it, it's got lots of potential

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::Dino:: · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 2:45 am

Anime=Animation, Manga=Comics. Nice pic...sex and violence is always cool

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Darkmoon · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 7:26 am

no way am i letting this go down with 2 replies hehehe

thanks for the replies who did, now look again! i finished it!

maybe i should tell people im a girl and giggle alot... then ill get 16 replies.

well, its half true! im a girl, now critique me! hehehe man no sleep.... 12... noon... wow... *giggle* oops, forgot to sleep.

anyways... yeah i know, no background. ignore that and reply to what i did do, not what i didnt, please o please....

-Lisa

Frost · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 7:31 am

Hiya Lisa. =)

nice work... you seem upset or something... hehe. =) It seems like the head was cut at the mouth level... very very sickening... a nice cut at the throat is much nicer and clean... this is just right down BAD. =)

Hmm, bad thing is that I can no longer log on to IRC, for some reason the servers seem to reject me or not respond... crap.

Cya on ICQ then... (if you're ever around).

Guy · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 8:23 am

Yikes!.. remind me never to get one your bad side

i like the pic. one thing that kinda gets to me is the blood on the blade. it looks very detailed compared to the rest of the character. so i dont know. maybe put less detail in it or put more detail in the character... or just leave it. doesnt matter, just thought id metion it

surferboi · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 8:23 am

its a great picture darkmoon... i love the expression on her face its the "wtf u looking at" look nice work on the blood n everything too

aquamire · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 8:29 am

Awww... you seem like the sweetest, most innocent little girl Darkmoon

I'm just kidding. Thats a really kick ass picture. Me likes.

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Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

I think it would be cuter if she had a pink top on and maybe a little skirt with a floral design. hehe

(On a serious note the finished version looks fantastic compared to the first post. I think your dark grey sections should have been a little lighter though, so you could see the detail. Looks great though.)

nori · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 12:09 pm

wow that's good. I'm glad you decided to finish it.

I had one of those days a while ago and let me tell you.. it took a long time for them to sow my head back on.

Rinaldo · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 12:49 pm

Heh...realx a bit maybe that'll help

The second one is a lot better. the solid forms make it stronger.
I'm not sure if the comment is refering to your head being choped. or you having to chop heads.

Jenn · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 1:22 pm

Nice. Would look heaps better with a bg.

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Darkmoon · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 3:49 pm

a background would just draw away from the point hehehe plus id have no idea what to draw as a background, but i think you just said that cause i said not to comment on the lack of background.

i would hope the second one was better than the first, considering the first was a concept sketch hehehe, and i am relaxed, its alot better than actually going out and chopping off someones head, less jail time too

shes in black cause when i draw anyone resembling me, shes always in black, cause well, i wear alot of black.... hehe i dont think i even could wear pink without being sick....

the sword looks more detailed cause Suma said it didnt look llike blood so i screwed around with it, gave it some shine and gave my little blond friend a tongue...

thank yous to all who liked it yay!

WHAT DOES EVERYBODY WANT? HEAD! WHAT DOES EVERYBODY NEED? HEAD!!! - Al Snow, WWF

-Lisa

rdgraffix · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 4:24 pm

I love the boots, moreso on the original sketch than the final though. I guess it's a case of definition.

Nice sword too, almost looks like a pair of beheading sheers - nice work

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Frank · junior member Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2000 Posts: 20

wonderful in a cute and sophisticated way. I can recommend a good pshcho-analyst. *giggle* oops.

Frank

ozenzo · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 6:00 pm

was that the competition?.........looks great, maybe a little more detailing on the outfit

Superbug · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 7:04 pm

Hey darkmoon, its funny how all the guys here will reply to a girl no matter how shitty or good their drawing is :P

But u need to work on your manga anatomy, if u want i'll draw u a revised pic. Also something is wierd about the way she is turned. Her eyes are too big i think, not enuf forehead. But yeah...keep chuggin

Visigoth · Guest Member #

Cool pic, Lisa!

I like the reflection of the face, in the giblets pooled on the floor.

(edited because I'm a turd and didn't look at it close enough)

[This message has been edited by Visigoth (edited September 20, 2000).]

DuKEZ · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 8:21 pm

hmmm girl on girl violence eh

i think any "girl on girl" thing gets males rowdy :P haha

i know girl fights at school draw more rowdy crowds haha, and every guy will admit that they wanted to see bras fly off and the such haha

nice picture, and finish comparison to the first version..

Sedul · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2000 8:39 pm

Oh god. dat's nasty.

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